Such a familiar face, the woman shopping in the store.
I remembered her, that little girl who once lived next door.
Long ago rivals, I watched her naively bend down toward the floor.
I smiled, inspired, I took her cart and ran for the door.
Little rotten Ronnie chanced to be mean just once more.
Friday Flash 55 is a fifty-five word story posted every Friday. To join in the fun, create and write any story you like in 55 words; no more, no less. Using this link, tell Mr. Knowitall a.k.a. the G-Man, by leaving a comment on his own Flash 55 post.
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I like the playfulness of this piece. We should all keep a piece of our child self inside.
I’m up right HERE
Love the photo with the piece.
BART’S HEART – OVER THE MOON
He had to tease just one more time didn't he?
Excellent 55 Buzzard!
I really appreciate your fine contributions...Thank You.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
you gave me a chuckle...remembering those days..great 55!
mine is up!
Cute. I liked this one! :) I got Calvin and Hobbes-vibes from this one... :) Love/ Jo.
Ah, even after all that time, he still hasn't grown up, LOL. Great!
My 55 is School Lunch
Awwwwww, days of youth. How we can sit back now as adults and remember 'em with laughter and 55s!!!
Mine this week is another 'non-fiction' fictionalized version. Butt to naked butts
[if you care to read, scroll down below my Friday's Show n Tell piece]
Have a great weekend.
that is too much!! awesome 55
Love the picture and little Rotten Ronnie...the boy next door.
I know you won't swallow everything but come on over.
That was so cute. Your 55 brought a smile which is a very good thing.
PG
beautiful post!
thank you for visiting me!
Hysterical. No kiss and make up here. Thanks for stopping by to read my 55. Loved yours.
LOL!!! This is great!
Too cute! I needed a smile this morning!! He sounds like my boys. Awesome 55.
♥Namaste♥
He's for it when she realises what he's done! LOL
Great 55.
Thanks for stopping by to read mine and taking the time to comment. I see you're a fellow Scorpio. :)
some folks never change, do they? lol cute scene you've painted
Ha! You're right, ours are similar! Good one...
Photo was GREAT!
Kids! lol
EXCELLENT 55!
Happy 55!
Happy Friday Follow!
Happy Round Robin!
Happy Friday Family!
Have you a ROCKING and SEXY WEEKEND!
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shakira
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Some times we never grow up.. thankfully
xx
My 55 is up
That's got your name written all over it!
Very funny! LOL I thought that you were trying to sneak a peek when she bent down!
Go Ronnie! Great 55.
:D That is so cute! I wouldn't leave such a chance either!
Reminds me of my childhood and my stupid little brother!! Oh, he was maddening. (and he STILL is) D
That was a lot of fun. Sometimes bad is good!
I love 55's which rhyme!
But did she see the funny side of it...?
Boys will always be boys, even when we're 95. A great short story.
Thanks to everyone that stopped to read and comment. I take much encouragement from your comments and joy.
A toast to childhood memories and those of us who refuse to grow completely up.
Happy Sunday!
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I agree with Hope--this is my favorite of the week! great post!
Again thanks for your encouragement!
There was always one little rotten Ronnie in our lives...nice job. I remember the bad girls who lived on the next block...I had to go out of my way each day to avoid them! :D
*sigh* boys! hahahaha ;-)
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