Thursday, August 19, 2010

Flash 55 Friday - First Date...

It took courage for Sergio to ask Leona out for their first date. Leona had always been so formal, and seemed just a bit shy. The idle chatter between them did nothing to change her mood, and now Sergio could only ponder how this beautiful girl, with such inviting eyes could be so tightly wrapped.

Friday Flash 55 is a fifty-five word story posted every Friday. To join in the fun, create and write any story you like in 55 words; no more, no less. Using this link, tell Mr. Knowitall a.k.a. the G-Man, by leaving a comment on his own Flash 55 post.
Buzzard

22 comments:

Anonymous said...

That has got to be the first cute and adorable set of bats I've ever laid eyes on! Nicely done, Buzz.

Monkey Man said...

Photo inspired? Regardless. An excellent 55. My 55 is HERE .

Brian Miller said...

haha. nice. so they are just hanging around together eh? nice 55 buzz!

my 55

moondustwriter said...

He needs to say words of love rather than "Let's hang out tonight"

Nice 55

I have no answers

Moon smiles

G-Man said...

Die Fliedermouse?
Most Excellent 55 Buzzard Man!
I've been wrapped a bit tight myself this week.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Someone Is Special said...

Very cute man.. nice 55.. My 55 is up, love at first sight

--Someone Is Special--

Stan Ski said...

Great 55 - love the batty approach.

Me said...

Cute 55!
(and, btw, I *love* bats!)

-C

PattiKen said...

Ha! i love that. I also like bats, for the record. Bats are our friends.

Greyscale Territory said...

Love this bat tale! Beautiful moment!

Claudia said...

this is so cute - hang in and hope she unwraps…smiles

mine is here

Eric Alder said...

I'll bet he can get her to spread her wings eventually. Good luck, Sergio!


WORD VERIFCATION: alturnti
DEFINITION: taking a different route in Italy.

Cheryl said...

Still giggling. That was simply awe-inspiring.

Fifteen is too young . . .

5thsister said...

I am impressed by the way you were able to weave an entire tale in just 55. Perfection!

Anonymous said...

On a wing and a prayer so they say LOL. Very well done my friend. I have never seen such cute bats. Excellent 55. Have a wonderful Friday :)

hope said...

FINALLY...a vampire themed story I could smile at. :)

Anonymous said...

I love the picture with the story. Great job!

Teresa

KB said...

They're adorable...shy indeed.

Mine’s here.

Anonymous said...

Oh maaaannn!!! Or should I say "Oh baaaaatttt"??!!

Awesome 55!!! Tightly wrapped?!?! hahah.. too much too good!! Inviting eyes indeed... :)

jozien said...

Hi there! I love your flashes! (of heat)

Jannie Funster said...

Tightly wound is the way I found most of my dates in the early years. TG a decent one finally came along.

Love can drive a person batty bytmes, tho. :)

xo

Nessa said...

Love will do that to you. Wonderful 55.